To my friend the artist
The pen dances across
the page - darkness at it's every wake;
The innocent white passes
away - it's blood spills black and gray.
A girl wields, this weapon
of art - posture serene and still;
The pen dances at her
will - to her tune it twirls and sways.
She pauses the pen to
view the spill, on the plain of white;
Then resumes again her
masterpiece - as the pen takes flight!
At last she sighs and turns
to reveal - a most charming sketch
I nod and listen as
she speaks - her face filled with delight.
I strive to notice the
subtleties - hidden between the lines.
But though I pretend to
comprehend - my flaws I cannot hide.
For as the pen observes,
it is not fooled by my disguise.
It knows that I am lost
that - I'm forever lost in her smile.
Theresa. V
This poem has got to be one among my favorites! I got the idea of personifying an artist's tools whilst watching my dear friend P sketching a face during class today. I tried to portray the paper as a being that has to sacrifice itself for the pen(cil)'s marks to show - the blood of the paper being the 'mark' of the pen(cil).
Right when the idea occurred to me - P showed me the sketch with such a pleased smile, that I could not help but feel the need to capture that special moment.
So many times I've had artist friends (like P, S and cupboard) show me their sketches and I have always wanted to bottle up their expression of humble accomplishment. I wanted to show artists how much we (their friends) love them. I do hope this poem does justice to all artists as well as to the feelings of us 'the audience'.
Do let me know your thoughts in the comments!
❤Tess.
One is not enough to express how much I love this poem... I would love to give u much more but I think I'll keep the rest for your upcoming ones... eagerly waiting for the next one ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
ReplyDeleteThank you so much, I'm so glad you enjoyed the poem. I really hope you enjoy all the writings to come!
Delete❤Tess
My God!! I'm at a loss for words. Thank you so much Tess for writing this. This just made my day. Thank you so much for appreciating my artworks every time I draw and this just boosted my confidence to the higest level. Love you lot's and I thank God for giving you such an amazing talent through which you are spreading happiness and strength to us. May God bless you more and Keep up the good work. ❤❤❤
ReplyDeleteI'm so glad you liked it Pauline! Can't wait to see you grow and better in art than you already are!❤
DeleteThank you so much for your prayers!
❤Tess
Omg! Omg! The last line of the poem!!!
DeleteCan I call this a masterpiece???❤️
Thank you Brijiii!❤❤❤
DeleteTime after time, you never fail to astonish me. The prospect of something so trivial — can be amalgamated into a bahemoth of a story is just alluring. The way each step of the craft being made is accentuated with their deep metaphors is "ART", but in a different shape.
ReplyDeleteThis is easily the best thing I read all week — no words, just awestruck — I reckon this fits the archetype of being called a BANGER, without a question!
I'm not a big poetry person — but I kinda fancy it now. Prolly, it is about time I take a leaf from your book and explore the expanse of poetry. Keep up the good work Tess and keep showering bangers!!!
Thank you so much for this amazing comment, I cannot tell you how happy this made me! I'm super chuffed that this has inspired you to explore the realm of poetry - I do hope you enjoy it as much as I do.
Delete❤ Tess
i don’t have big literature brains to comprehend what the poetess wants to convey. but one thing what i can say for sure is, this is NOTHING less than a MASTERPIECE. you really have a way with words to subtly express simple stuff in a poetic manner.
ReplyDeletehave you ever considered taking up a degree in English Literature?
i’m pretty sure after the line above, this comment is no more anonymous to you 😁
anyways would love to read more from you. keep it up 🤌♥️
Helloooo! yes I do know who is behind this mask of anonymity - and I'm pretty sure your first ranker brain can definitely comprehend everything😂
DeleteBut jokes aside - thank you so much for the kind words and taking the time to read this! Oh and, will be starting my English degree when you start your career/degree in "Misic" 😁 Hope you enjoy all that is to come!
🤍Tess.